Hold On Let Go

Okay, so this may turn out to be a bit embarrassing, but I sort of wrote lyrics to an as of yet non excisting song, that I would like to share with you. I maybe suck in it, but I just thought to give it a go. Use the comment option to let me know what you think of it (even if you absolutely hate it). So here goes:

Hold On Let Go
Without you even knowing it
I've waited all this time
Dreaming of that day to come
The day that you'd be mine
My heart was thirsty for a chance
For you to let me in
I played so long this lottery
Your heart the prize to win

chorus:
But then I see you
And I'm melting away
The day I first met you
Has been the happiest day
Of my life

Will I ever get there
Asking myself at night
Will my dream have any chance
Turning it into right
Maybe I should forget about it
Maybe I should give up
Close the book and just let go
And call for this to stop

repeat chorus

Hold on, let go, hold on, let go
The love I need to find
Hold on, let go, hold on, let go
I just can't make up my mind

repeat chorus